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Wednesday, July 6, 2016

In Reading we have been learning to write Positive Blog Comments.

In Reading we are learning to write Positive Blog Comments.

So this is a comment that I did on the year 6 camp post.
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I have learned to write Positive comments 
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1 comment:

  1. Mr WilkinsonAugust 8, 2016 at 3:26 PM

    I can tell you are trying really hard with this Kevin. Your comments tell much more information the second time you have done it. Also, remember to re read your post once you have written it to see if you can spot anything that should be changed.

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