I was a pupil in Uru Mānuka and this blog is where I shared my learning.
I think that this was a cool story and but I think you could put in some full stops but besides that I think this story was interesting and creative.
Hello Kevin It's Keisha from Gilberthorpe school (in your class)I like your story.Next time add some descriptive words and a story about what you did!But you will need to edit it because it's so small too readBlog you later
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I think that this was a cool story and but I think you could put in some full stops but besides that I think this story was interesting and creative.
ReplyDeleteHello Kevin It's Keisha from Gilberthorpe school (in your class)
ReplyDeleteI like your story.
Next time add some descriptive words and a story about what you did!
But you will need to edit it because it's so small too read
Blog you later